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October, 2002

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california
** Part One **

It had been going on for days. He'd sit on the bus a few seats in front of me, thinking he was being inconspicuous I guess. But I could see his backward looks out of the corner of my eye. It was driving me crazy, like puppy love does when you're not the puppy.

I finally found my opportunity at a Sbarro in the middle of Indiana. I sat down before he could notice behind a plastic plant at the end of the pasta bar. Through the plant I could see him at the marinara sauce, looking quickly around the seats to see where I might have gone. I had the element of surprise.

"Why you followin' me?" I said loudly, popping a teeny garlic toast into my mouth.

"What!?" His look of panic gave way to a crafty insolence. He'd obviously seen Peter Lorre in The Maltese Falcon. "Because you're writing about me, that's why."

"Says who?" said I, unable to conceal my immigrant heritage.

"Do you deny it?"

"Deny this," I said, still in character. "If I catch you paying attention to my business again you'll wish writing was my only talent. Now beat it, and sit somewhere else from now on."

"I'll wish writing were your only talent," he said.

After I finished I cornered the little pipsqueak in the restroom and gave him an idea what a sink can do to a head if you're not careful. I hate to be edited.

His name turned out to be Edmund. I knew he must be from one of those countries where titles and manners still matter, because he had an annoying tone to his voice which said he'd been brought up better than I had. Maybe Boston. I never could stand those people. Anyway, I asked around and found out who he was, but not why he was going to California. Why was I going to California? You got me. Something to do to pass the time, I guess.

When Edmund turned up dead I felt a little guilty, at first, partially because I didn't miss the little bastard at all and partially because I was worried I had caused it with this paragraph. His seat partner, though, a tall stewardess from Scandinavia somewhere who wanted to see the ground for a change, said he'd been dead for a few hours, and I wrote this just now. She said she thought he'd been asleep, or pretending to be, because he real casually reached over and put his hand on her knee and then left it there for about three hours, the little pervert. The thing was, when she finally had to get up to go to the bathroom she realized his watch was caught in her stocking, and when she managed to get it unstuck he just kind of flopped over into the aisle like the stiff that he was. She probably thought the jerk was going to make his move, and instead he left the planet. What some women go for, I don't know.

When the coroner finished looking over the body so we could get on our way we all heard over the intercom that "unfortunately the late lamented passenger had died a natural death while napping and had no doubt gone on to his just reward" or some such crap. I was not looking forward to putting up with a lot of fake mourning for another 2000 miles.

You know how it goes in these stories, some of the other people started saying how it didn't make sense for somebody to just go like that with no provocation. Maybe they saw the faucet marks on his head or I don't know what, but it seems like they decided I did something to bag the guy and make it look like a regular old death by heart attack or gallbladder or something. I figured I had to nip that in the bud right off, especially since I had this whole thing to finish and couldn't be distracted by some kind of vigilante escapade, so I decided to go find out what I could. If somebody did off the guy, which I wouldn't blame them for for a minute, at least I could turn them in so the pressure would be off me to explain what happened.

First I thought I'd go for the stewardess. If anybody had seen something, she might have. The only thing was, these foreign girls, they talk the universal language just fine, but when it comes to a real conversation it's not so easy. On the other hand, she let this guy feel her up for three hours, so one way or the other I thought it might turn out to be a profitable experience. I went up and sat in the dead guy's seat.

"How you doin'?" was my opening. I didn't get raised in the Bronx for nothing.

"It's so sad, about the dead guy, right?" she said, flashing her killer, um, smile.

"Yeah, well, everybody's talking like I did something to him, which I didn't, so it would be nice to clear that up, ya know?"

"Oh, what did you do?" she said, not getting it.

I decided on a different angle. "Did he know anybody on the bus besides you?" I asked.

"Well, he didn't 'know' me," she said, laughing. Was this girl some kind of Norwegian biblical scholar? "We just, you know, sat here and talked a little and then he put on my knee his hand and died! There was no time for any other thing."

"OK, so whadja talk about?" I asked.

"Well, let's see, he said that he was born in Belgium but educated in Great Britain, you know, because there are the very good schools there, although in my country also the schools are really perfect, you would be surprised at how well educated the students become when they go there, and then he told me that he was going to kill somebody!"

I looked at her then. Was she kidding? There was nothing in her face, and I don't think she could speak the language that well anyway. I decided she must just be telling the truth. For all the good that did me. It was going to be a long trip.

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